rephrased various output strings

4 files changed, 12 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/weatbag/tiles/n2w1.py b/weatbag/tiles/n2w1.py
index aa54ca2..999cdc1 100644
--- a/weatbag/tiles/n2w1.py
+++ b/weatbag/tiles/n2w1.py
@@ -18,14 +18,13 @@ class Tile:
               "The little boy laughs  and replies: \n"
               "So you think you are brave enough to go to that island? "
               "Very well, but we cannot give you our raft. "
-              "What we can do is transfer you there ourselves. But first you "
+              "What we can do is transport you there ourselves. But first you "
               "must answer this:\n\n"
               "Ignore weight and weather variables and listen carefully.\n"
-              "It takes for me to transfer a person on the island exactly one "
-              "hour.\n"
-              "It takes double the time for my sister.\n"
-              "If we combine our powers, "
-              "how many minutes will it take to transfer you on the island?\n"
+              "It takes me exactly one hour to transport a person to the island.\n"
+              "It takes my sister double that time.\n"
+              "If we combine our power, "
+              "how many minutes will it take to transport you to the island?\n"
               "To make a guess, type a number followed by 'minutes'.\n")
 
     def action(self, player, do):
diff --git a/weatbag/tiles/n2w4.py b/weatbag/tiles/n2w4.py
index f4309b5..12b0d93 100644
--- a/weatbag/tiles/n2w4.py
+++ b/weatbag/tiles/n2w4.py
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ class Tile:
                   "their momcat!\n")
         else:
             print("You are standing in front of the hut's door. The hut "
-                  "looks very small and you wonder who could live there...\n"
+                  "looks very small and you wonder who could live here...\n"
                   "It has a door but you can't open it because the doorknob "
                   "is missing.\n") 
     
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ class Tile:
                 player.take('doorknob') 
                 print("Doorknob fits fine, clicks and voila... Door is open!\n"
                       "\nYou are in a cozy living room with a cat and 5 kittens"
-                      " resting on a couch.\nThere is another room at west.\n")
+                      " resting on a couch.\nThere is another room to the west.\n")
                 self.opendoor = True
             else:
                 print("You'll need a doorknob to open the door.\n")
diff --git a/weatbag/tiles/n3w1.py b/weatbag/tiles/n3w1.py
index a5e05b9..aec7508 100644
--- a/weatbag/tiles/n3w1.py
+++ b/weatbag/tiles/n3w1.py
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 class Tile:
     def describe(self):
-        print("The beach is quiet. On the south are children playing.\n")
+        print("The beach is quiet. To the south children are playing.\n")
     
     def action(self, player, do):
         print("wo0t w0ot?! o_O")
@@ -8,11 +8,10 @@ class Tile:
     def leave(self, player, direction):
         if direction == 'w':
             print("I'm afraid you can't go west.\nThe sea on that part is "
-                  "fool of electric eels and you don't have a transport.\n")
+                  "full of electric eels and you don't have a transport.\n")
             return False
         elif direction == 'e':
-            print("There is the side of a cave in front of you.\nYou can't go "
-                  "east.\n")
+            print("There's a steep mountainside here which you can't climb.")
             return False
         elif direction == 'n':
             print("               ,               , \n"
diff --git a/weatbag/tiles/n3w2.py b/weatbag/tiles/n3w2.py
index a5c46cd..9ff35a5 100644
--- a/weatbag/tiles/n3w2.py
+++ b/weatbag/tiles/n3w2.py
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@ class Tile:
         if not self.give_catfood:
             print("You are at the beach and there is an old man with an "
                   "enormous beard that is getting his little boat ready to go "
-                  "across to the mainland.\nNaturally, you are asking him to "
+                  "across to the mainland.\nNaturally, you ask him to "
                   "take you in his boat.\nThe old man replies:\nOf course I "
                   "can take you with me, my dear adventurer but first I need "
-                  "some catfood so I can feed the kitties across in the "
+                  "some catfood so I can feed the kitties across on the "
                   "mainland!\n")
         else:
             print("There's the old fisherman with his boat, he can take you "